josephine lilly sparks

[josephine]

-- JOSEPHINE LILLY SPARKS !

-- NAME: Josephine Lilly Sparks
-- NICKNAMES: Joey
-- AGE & BIRTHDAY: 18, July fifteenth
-- BIRTH PLACE: Capeside
-- ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
-- OCCUPATION & SCHOOL GRADE: Senior, Waitress as Chelli's pizza.
-- SECRET: 009. You dont know who your real parents are.
-- PLAYED BY: Sierra Kusterbeck

-- PERSONALITY !

-- OUTGOING: Joey is one of those girls that is you even say her first name, almost anyone can say 'I know her' or 'I know of her'. Joey is a very outgoing, social girl. She loves talking, and getting to know people. Most people are scared to just go up to someone and say hi, this isnt the case for Joey. Sometimes that can lead to her getting into trouble. She is also the type of girl who says whats on her mind when its on her mind. That is also something that gets her into a lot of trouble.
-- COCKY: Joey is very cocky. She says alot of sarcastic things that can sometimes offend alot of people. She is known to be either sarcastic, cocky or vulgar. Her parents have said that she is a guy trapped in a female body. Joey is friends with alot of guys, so their attitudes and words and mentality tends to rub off onto her. Joey usually has something smart - assed to say if someone even comes at her with a smart comment she will rip them apart.
-- HONEST: Joey is probably the most honest, real, truthful girl that you will ever meet. She says it like it is and has no problem saying something to someones face. Joey is not one to talk about someone behind their back, she'll just right out and say it, even with them in the room. Joey doesnt give a flying rats behind what anyone thinks of her. She isnt the type of girl who will pick out people faults, she always TRIES to find the good in a person, but if she doesnt, she usually just doesnt even try. Joey is a blunt girl and has no filter between her brain and mouth.

-- LOVES: Long Walks, Surfing, Playing Guitar, Her Ipod, Running, Her Dog, Driving around with no destination, Reading, Sitting on the roof, Talking random walks, Winter, Painting, Mini Golf, Parties, Boys, Motorcycles, Anything Dangerous.
-- HATES: Racists, Meat, Heat, Getting Sick, Disappointment, Liars, Being Alone, Small Spaces, Cheaters, Fakers, Snobs.

-- HISTORY !

Not many people can proudly say that their parents are Gay. Josephine Lilly Sparks can however. Joey was born into a family that never loved her. They didnt want her, but they didnt know how to get rid of her. Joey's mother was a crack addict and her father wasnt around. Things were hard, Joey grew up with men in and out of her house, always touching her, and calling her baby and cutie. It wasnt until Joey was four that this all changed. One day, little baby Joey was sitting in the living room playing with her toys, her mother was trying to make a crack deal with a gentleman.

The man touched Joey, in a way that he shouldn't have, as soon as her mother left the room. Screaming, Joey's mother ran out. The man left, leaving Joey terrified and her mother angry and drug-less. That was when she got dumped. Literally. Later that night, Joey and her mother went for a walk. Stopping out front of a small family owned restaurant, her mother said wait here, Ill be back. Little did Joey know that was the last time she'd see her mother.

Joey was put into a foster home, and within a few weeks, two gentleman, Marty and Gene Sparks found her, and they fell in love. They knew that she was different, and they liked that. Joey grew up, a not so normal life. Alot of her life was spent alone. She was an only child, and sometimes she liked it that way. The kids in her school were so critical because of her parents. Joey usually just sat there and listened, taking the abuse. However, when she hit fifth grade, that all changed.

Joey had started getting angrier and angrier at the fact everyone was tormenting her family, and one day, little Mary Jane Specter had pushed her too far. MJ used to be Joey's best friend, but something clicked in MJ's mind and she started making fun of Joey's parents everyday for three years. Well that day it was enough to make Joey snap. That was the first time she ever got into a fight, and it wasnt the last. Joey grew up defending herself and her family.

Still an only child now, her parents are looking into adoption again. However, Joey almost fueled them with her own baby, a grandson of theirs. When Joey was sixteen she went to a party, she doesnt remember much from the party, except the two months after. Joey had gotten pregnant. Having no idea who the father was, or what to do, she simply just went with it. Joey had run away from her family, moving in with her best friend Abbigail. However, one month later, Joe found out she miscarried. Devastated she vowed to never have sex again, until she was ready. No one knows about Joey's pregnancy except Abby.

Today Joey lives back home with her parents in their small home. Her parents are looking into adpting twin girls, and Joey is in her senior year at the highschool in Capeside. Joey is still getting into trouble with parties and drinking, but she is a good kid overall.

-- SAMPLE !

The apartment of the small Kalligaras family was quiet, for once. Brooke Kalligaras, instead of laying in her warm bed, was laying on the couch, an infant sprawled across her stomach and chest breathing heavily, a pacifier in his mouth. He sounded extremly congested. It was silent, and calm. Peaceful, until spunky, the dog in the apartment next door let out a yelp. The young infant, Bentley Kalligaras, let out a low groan and pushed himself up beginning to cry. Brooke's eyes flew open and she sat up cuddling Bentley shushing him back to sleep. She cradled his body in her arms and began to rock him back and forth talking to him in a soothing voice.

Soon enough, the infants eyes slid shut. Bentley had been sick for the past week, and it was just getting worse. Using all her strength, she pushed herself and the tot off of the couch. She had to get ready to take him to the doctors. Walking to the babies room she set him down in the aquarium decorated crib. She smiled and ran her hands across his cheek. Walking back out into the hall she shut the door silently behind her.

Brooke let out a soft sigh and walked into her own master bedroom. Stepping into the bathroom she took a quick shower, hoping to not wake up the baby. When she got out she dressed herself and used to towel to handdry her naturally wavy brown hair. Stepping out into the living room she looked around, peace at last. She knew that she had to wake the baby up soon, but now he could sleep. Picking up his toys she cleaned up as much as she could. The living room was very contemporary. It was nice, for a lower class apartment, Brooke made means with what she had.

Looking at the clock she let out a soft sigh. Time to wake up Bentley. Walking into his room she slid the door open. Her eyes fell upon a sight that almost made her cry. Bentley, laying silently, looked just like hayden. she felt a tear come to her eye and she had to just hug him. It had been almost a year since Hayden had died. It was rough, but somehow Brooke managed. It was a good thing that she had Bentley, without him she would probably be dead herself.

Brooke knew that she had to get over Hayden someday, but it was hard...especially considering he was her first love, her first 'time' and her first boyfriend. Brooke sighed and walked over picking up the baby who was now awake. She changed him quickly and headed out towards the living room. Her phone began to ring oudlyy and she groaned realizing it was the doctor "Hello?" she said, her italian accent coming through a bit.

Her smile turned to a grin, to a froan, to a complete and utter look of disgust. The doctor had cancelled all appointments for the day. Brooke looked at Bentley who was playing with his fake phone pretending to talk. Brooke chuckled "well we have to take you somewhere dont we handsome" she said chuckling. Picking him up she put him in his dinosaur stroller and headed out the door. Walking down the street she laughed as Bentley barked back at small dogs and smiled at women who complimented how cute he was.

Arriving at the mall Brooke took Bentley straight to the food court, it was lunch time. She quickly whipped out his cheeri-o's and began feeding them to him. She let out a sigh and looked around noticing all the teens who were with her friends. It was times like these she felt so alone.

-- OOC !

-- NAME OR ALIAS: Lauren
-- AGE: Eighteen
-- THREE WORDS THAT DESCRIBE YOU: Random, Funny, Active
-- HOW YOU FOUND US: Advertisement on another site (:

[* NIKKI THE PEACOCK QUEEN]

- Watch how many times you start a sentence with her name or the word she.
- Do you possibly have another sample we could look at? The one you've provided starts out very oddly and heads in a totally different direction than it seems to have meant to. You also need to use proper punctuation with speech, such as quotation marks and commas, ect.

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[josephine]

Hey, I modified it, added a new sample and hopefully made all the right corrections. If not, please let me know and I will work more on it.
Thanks.

[* NIKKI THE PEACOCK QUEEN]

-- ACCEPTED !

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