brella marie davis

[leah]

-- BRELLA MARIE DAVIS !

-- NAME: Brella Marie Davis
-- NICKNAMES: Bre, Ells, Ella,
-- AGE & BIRTHDAY: 23, August 17th, 1988
-- BIRTH PLACE: Arlington, Virginia
-- ORIENTATION: Caucasian
-- OCCUPATION & SCHOOL GRADE: Local singer/Horse riding teacher
-- PLAYED BY: Miranda Lambert

-- PERSONALITY !

-- ENTERGETIC: Ells is one of the most energetic people you will meet. She is hyper and very outgoing. Which I guess can be good because she works with a lot of kids and shes a performer. She has been told she should be on ADHD medication but she never listens. Her mother once joked that they would put her in a rubber room.
-- FORGIVING: Ella is one of the most forgive people you will ever meet. You say something bad about her and she just shrugs it off. Forgive and Forget is her motto. She loves each and every person she meets. She sees them for who they are. Not for the drug addict in them or the alcoholic in them, She sees the good.
-- SELF-RELIANT: Brella has learned to pick up the pieces and so she is very self-reliant on everything. She falls she doesn't except the hand someone puts out to help her up. She will get herself up. She doesn't rely on many people to help her through.

-- LOVES:
Horses, Singing, Being Random, Music, Cake, Ice Cream, Animals, Little Kids, The Mall, Rubber Ducks
-- HATES:
Pie, Jerks, Pineapples, Rap Music, The Twilight Books, Being Told What To Do, Getting Drunk, Whiskey, Nail Polish, Earrings.

-- HISTORY !

Brella was born in Arlington, Virginia. That name sound familiar? Well the Pentagon's located there. Her father was in the Navy. Brella barley remembers life as a civilian as she wasn't really one until she was about seventeen. When Brella was just under two years old her father was deployed to fight in the Gulf War. She doesn't remember much of her father because he was almost always at work. Her mother was basically a single mother and raised Ella by herself. Her father had logged over 100 hours in the Gulf War and she still is proud of him to this day. When she was about seven her brother, Joshua David, was born. She has a step-sister from her mothers side named, Leah Anne. Leah is 29 years old and when she was 19 she was living in New York. What was in New York exactly that had caught Leah's eye? Well the colleges of course. She took 13 year old Brella with her over her summer break. When September 11th happened Leah wanted to help and so did Ella. The two sisters helped out by cooking for the rescue workers. Brella tells everyone that she isn't a hero she was simply helping when they hear her 9/11 story. Brella has told her 9/11 story at colleges and high schools. Saying that the things she saw those few weeks her sister and her helped out are images she will never forget. Ella remembers the scared looked on those workers faces. When asked how much she remembers of 9/11 she says 'unfortunately everything.' She remembers it all because where she lived she lived only two blocks from the Twin Towers. She tries her best to live without those haunting images but she just cant. When she was seventeen her father was honorably discharged from the Navy and for once in her life she was a civilian. Ella is now 23 years of age and going strong. She smiles almost everyday and is glad to be here.

-- SAMPLE !

A blonde haired blue eyed girl sat at the end of the Ravenclaw table. She was alone once again and she wasn't bothered by this. The girls name was Freedom Liberty Young. She sat at the end of the table reading a book. It was a rainy September day as she sat there. She knew she should be eating but she wasn't hungry. She looked up from her book and saw her brother siting next to you. "Oh, Hey Luka." Luka was a fourth year Ravenclaw. Luka was really the only friend Free had in the school. Free was a shy girl. She was very sweet once you got past the initial stage of awkwardness. She went back to her book. She slowly got up from the table and looked at Luka. "See you in common room, Luka" She picked up her book and walked out. She walked through the lonely corridors of Hogwarts. She walked up to the common room portrait and gave the password. Free walked in and sat down in large yellow chair. She pulled some homework out of her bag and started to work on it. She finished her charms homework and moved onto the potions homework. Potions was not her favorite subject nor was Professor Snape her favorite professor. She finished the surprisingly simple potions work and moved on to transfiguration. Again not her favorite subject but she did like the professor. She finished that work and deiced to take a break. She went up to the empty dorm and sat on her bed. She pulled out a piece of clean parchment and wrote to her mother and father. WORD COUNT: 274

-- OOC !

-- NAME OR ALIAS: Caitlin or Kate works.
-- AGE: 13
-- THREE WORDS THAT DESCRIBE YOU: Hyper, outgoing, funny
-- HOW YOU FOUND US: Caution

[jesse]

- Orientation means sexual orientation. So unless she's only attracted to white people, something has gone wrong.
- None of your personality paragraphs are long enough and they are choppily written, have zero flow and provide no in depth description on why she is these things.
- Pie is the source of all that is holy.
- You history is also choppy and lacks flow and your character never once mentions Capeside, where the site is set. As far as we know she's still in New York telling stories or whatever it was she was doing.
- Your sample does not meet our site requirement of 350 words.

I'm sorry but I don't think your application is salvagable. This is a lit to advance site and as far as I've seen, you don't meet our requirements.

-- DENIED !

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