sophie elisabeth wilson

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-- SOPHIE ELISABETH WILSON !

-- NAME:Sophie Elisabeth Wilson
-- NICKNAMES:Soph, Soff toff, Lizzie, Willy
-- AGE & BIRTHDAY:13, May 22nd
-- BIRTH PLACE:Small town in Mass.
-- ORIENTATION:American
-- OCCUPATION & SCHOOL GRADE:9th? or eighth grade?
-- PLAYED BY:Emily Everhard

-- PERSONALITY !

-- Quiet: Sophie used to be this fun little girl that was always smiling and happy and used to make others even smile when she would smile or laugh. Now though she's become really quiet almost like she's reserved but that's because of the wall she's built up not trusting people. It isn't like she's shy, she never really has been a shy girl just doesn't know what to say most of the time...well that's the truth so she just keeps quiet most of the time. She loves when people talk for her, even if it isn't right or what she was wanting to say...just if she has the chance to let someone step in. She does so.

-- Great liar: Soph sure can lie her way out of anything but by the way she's grown up it's not to surprising. She's got it down now that you can't tell when she isn't lying. Her philosophy is 'The secret to a good lie is don't overly explain and throw in one good detail' She'd tell you lying is her super power, she doesn't even crack a smile as she tells you a lie. But the sad thing is...her lies are her life...she lives off the lies she'll tell one like her mothers in Italy studying abroad helping this family and her fathers in the army so she lives with her aunt. Or her mother is a Lawyer and her father is an accountant or something like that...her lies sadly make the girl happy as she makes up a fake life writing them down in her diary...but she'll tell anyone about her 'happy' life.

-- Sarcastic is an unsuspecting way:Even though she's not as out going as she used to be, Sophie can 'cut' someone really quick and they not even notice it till she's already walked away. Even she doesn't mean it sometimes but it just comes out. When you get this girl to talk it'll either be a flat out lie that she's conducted up or she'll be sarcastic. Like something she'd say to someone and mean it would be. "Well, it doesn't even really matter, my father is in the army he has been for two years now and when he does come home which is two times in three months he gives me anything I want because he loves me, if your father loved you he'd get you stuff." She loves creating a picture perfect world and throwing it at people like she loves her life.

-- LOVES: Her mother even if she never met her
the friends that she does have
her therapist
school counselor
people who care about her and listen to her
boys
shoes
strawberries
ice cream
feeling like shes needed
-- HATES: her father
her self(at times)
school
talking to much
people who don't get what she means
sunsets
good bye
looking to vulnerable
silence (bc it screams the truth)
rap music

-- HISTORY !

Sophie was born to, two parents who fought from the minute she was born. They were high school sweet hearts and definitely changed from high school. Sophie was used to the fighting and the hate in the house from day one but there was nothing she could do and she didn't know she could because it was what she was used to.

At 5 years old Sophie killed her mother.She had run away and then returned getting her stuff. Sophie didn't mean to it kind of just happened but it was something her father never lets down to this day. Her mother and father were fighting after she came back(to get her! that's what she wants to believe) she was playing in her mothers clothes dressing up in them and her mom was talking to her when Mike came in screaming carrying a gun, Her mom pushed Sophie down onto the ground so she wasn't in the way and then fought Mike with the gun. Soph screamed at her parents to stop she was actually scared for once because she knew what a gun was she learned about them in school. As they continues to struggle Soph threw stuff at them and eventually the gun fell to the ground. That's when Sophie picked it up and the fighting stopped the room was all the sudden an eerie silence and her parents screamed at her to put the gun down but it went off and Sophie's mother fell to the ground that's when Mike lifted her and threw her out of the room.

Mike called the cops because they had to do something about it but it was an accident she didn't know what she was doing but for having the gun in reach of a child which was child endangerment Mike was in jail a couple days and let out on bail. From then her father just seemed to get joy out of making her cry and she'd spend most of her days in her room so there wasn't many things her father could get mad at her for.


When she turned eight years old her father was more than forced to put her with a therapists, he didn't want to but the school told him she was obviously traumatized and needed to talk to someone. He feared that she'd tell on him for beating her so her threatened her for her very first time scaring her out of ever telling anyone. Her therapists name was Miss Steph and Sophie loved her right away, she was a totally different girl when she was with her and no matter how many times she was in and out of the hospital Step seemed to always show up and be there for her.-She just didn't understand what was going on in that little girls life.

Steph could tell something was going on with the girl and the relationship she had between her father but she couldn't tell quit yet. She spent most days just trying to figure out what made this girl 'tick' what made her mad what made her happy what was unique about Sophie Wilson- a very hard process because Sophie didn't let anyone see the real her. She barley knew her self anymore.

At 10 her best friend gave her a diary, that became the girls best friend because the bestie that gave it to her moved away. Her diary knew all her secrets and was always there for her...she wrote her life stories in the thing but the main thing was that she killed her mother and she'd never be forgiven for it. Even Steph didn't know what was in her diary. When with Steph She was happy but never spoke about her father or mother just was happy to be with someone who cared about her. Steph would ask continuously her 'If she could stay beside her and protect her would she like that?" just to see if she'd let something slip out but Soph would simply say "if i needed saving yes..." it was just she had a wall built that she didn't let people into that part of her life. When with others it was like her father didn't exist and she never killed her mother.

-- SAMPLE !

As Brooklyn spun her she laughed slightly but smiled why was it that she wasn't afraid to do anything around Brooke. It was like nothing else mattered because she had a best friend so why should what anyone else had to say matter? But, that was just her thought on things anyway. Sometimes she did get a little freakish and worry what someone was saying about her but usually Brooklyn would remind her other people didn't matter, well at least that's what it seemed like to Paige a lot of the times when she would tell Brooke about someone.

She watched her friend carefully as she walked away getting ipod still clearly wanting to hear what she said because she had stopped and sat down on one of the bleachers. Paige took a step or two closer to the bleachers, she bent down pulled her hair up in to some type of messy bun getting her self ready at the same time. She was a girl, she could multi task. "So here is it, my dad and Shelley might get married and so then, well actually she already has been...but it'd be officially..." she began rambling on not getting to the point right away as she began thinking about it to her self.

She waved her hand in the air "Any way they might get married soon..even if they have been saying it for years now but same difference just if they do doesn't that mean officially she will be my mom?" she finally got to the point of her story but truth be told, it always took Paige a year and a half to get to her point when she told stories. Non the less anyone could tell the girl was genuinely excited about the statement, even if the couple had been 'thinking' about it for a couple years now. To Paige it was something that she liked, and she clasped her hands together in front of her showing her friend her excitement.

"But I dunno guess it's whatever" she brought her hands back down and pulled her skirt off, that had spandex under it and grabbed her sweatpants out of her bag pulling them on still getting ready.

-- OOC !

-- NAME OR ALIAS:bex
-- AGE:15 I'll be 16 in a couple days
-- THREE WORDS THAT DESCRIBE YOU:uhm shy, annoying, talk your ear off!
-- HOW YOU FOUND US:looking for a site to join just off others!

[evkav]

You have a good start to the application Bex, but there's just a few things that need to be looked at.
- The title is in the wrong format. If you could please change it to 'first middle last'
- It would be good if you could please add a bit more detail to the personality paragraphs. Try to write around 100-200 words for each point.
- Also, where it says 'TRAIT ONE' put the actual trait that you're describing there. So instead of TRAIT ONE put QUIET and same for the others
- Just a few things with the history. How did she kill her mother? And also, would the police have been involved or whatever, someone dying usually doesn't go unnoticed.
- Maybe just read through the history again because there are a few sentences that don't quite make sense. Such as this one, 'When she turned eight her father was more than forced to but her with a physiatrist, and though it was pricey he did but he knew she'd never tell on him because she was afraid of him.'
- Your sample doesn't quite meet the requirements of the site. We do ask for 350 words.
Thanks so much. Once you've fixed these just give one of the admins a shout and we'll be more than happy to look over it again. Thanks Bex

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[evkav]

-- ACCEPTED !

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[* NIKKI THE PEACOCK QUEEN]

I know you've been accepted, but just one thing- orientation means sexual preference. Please edit that, hon.

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